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A smile here,
A laugh there,
My nervous hands
Play with my hair.

Where's the pain?
Where's the tear
That slowly leaves
A trail quite clear?

Shrug it off,
Tell a lie,
Nothing is wrong,
No one has died.

No more black,
Good-bye ink.
Would you believe
I mourn in pink?
©2008-2009 *DarkIceKitsune
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This was written quite a while back. Mmm, probably back in November when...I seemed to be depressed for whatever reason.It's pretty short and to the point. And it actually relates to me. ^^
This poem was written when I was reminded of a friend. He died last year, and we were told we shouldn't wear any black. Instead, we wore pink. I think this is another reason why I dislike the color so much. I registers as a mourning color in my mind.
I'll probably have a picture that goes with this, but as of yet I haven't been able to draw up a satisfactory one.
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This made me cry, Dark. You really know how to right them. I'll hopefully get one up shortly (like within the next two days)

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I can get you arrested! There's a policeman- Bryson
That's a fireman dip-shit!- Hikari
Same thing!- Bryson
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*in sing-song voice* I have a Dark on my lap!- Hikari
No fair- Kyle
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I miss you Rici. A years past. I need you now more then ever
this is achingly beautiful. it lovely lovely lovely :+favlove:

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'I'm not a tree- I'm a fucking sheep!'

~ Black Sheep
:hug: I'm both glad and sad that I can invoke such emotion. I really don't want you crying, dear.

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We shouldn't discuss colors at all, just see what we both end up with.~Devi
Like being blindfolded in a dark room with 7 buckets of paint in a circle around you as you sit cross-legged and try to summon the correct color with your mind.~Dark
:aww: thanks so much. I'm so amazingly glad you like it. I appreciate the fave too. ^^

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We shouldn't discuss colors at all, just see what we both end up with.~Devi
Like being blindfolded in a dark room with 7 buckets of paint in a circle around you as you sit cross-legged and try to summon the correct color with your mind.~Dark
:D it almost made me cry. its really touching. sorry about your friend.

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'I'm not a tree- I'm a fucking sheep!'

~ Black Sheep
:) well, there's nothing I can do about it, so I guess I just have to continue living for him.

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We shouldn't discuss colors at all, just see what we both end up with.~Devi
Like being blindfolded in a dark room with 7 buckets of paint in a circle around you as you sit cross-legged and try to summon the correct color with your mind.~Dark
that poem just made me shed my first tear in about eight years. really. it's that strong to me. :+fav:

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Snails see the benefits,
The beauty in every inch.
:hug: thanks so much for the fave, dear.
it's been making everyone cry...And as I've mentioned, it makes me both sad and happy. sad that people are crying, but happy that it touches them enough to cry...it's such a conflicting feeling.

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We shouldn't discuss colors at all, just see what we both end up with.~Devi
Like being blindfolded in a dark room with 7 buckets of paint in a circle around you as you sit cross-legged and try to summon the correct color with your mind.~Dark
yes, i suppose that is the best anyone can do.

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'I'm not a tree- I'm a fucking sheep!'

~ Black Sheep
Man, I cried too!
I'm not even kidding. This seriously, its very VERY touching. Its so sad, but at the same time, its uplifting. I like it VERY much. :+fav:

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"If I make one little mistake one of the girls always explodes like a suicide bomber, sending all the others into a state of panic."~Kyle

"Uh-oh, Kyle has a hammer.."~Erin
"And a cow bell!"~Kyle. :)

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